What do u think of this poem..due tom and i need opnions!!?

%26quot;I was out in the lawn one day


About mid-May I would say


I noticed the beautiful arrangement of flowers


Bewildered at the bloom in so little hours


Love at first sight I would say





Enticing aroma fills the air


Picking the gems I shall not dare


Such gorgeous contours, surround me


What so proudly made by He





Heavenly formation looks and scents


Commonly grown along a fence


Thanks to god, thanks to the world


For giving me a chance to celebrate this moral


Love at first sight I would say





They decorate parties, reunions, and dances


Many designs on blouses and pants


Flawless way to say “I love you”


Comes in daises, pansies, roses and yarrows





I was out in the lawn one day


When I noticed the beautiful arrangement of flowers


Love at first sight I would say


Thank you Lord for letting me celebrate life another day%26quot;
What do u think of this poem..due tom and i need opnions!!?

FlowersBirthday FlowersSympathy FlowersI think it is lovely! I would classify it whatever you want it to be, since it is your work, your creation. If it is a school project, then you need to get the specifics and nail it one way or the other. But for poets, I feel like we can create our own works of art like painters, musicians, etc. Thanks for sharing.
Reply:I%26#039;m glad, it is a lovely poem. Thank you too! Report It

Reply:You sort of dance between wanting to be rhyming and not, between wanting to be metered and not. I%26#039;m not a poetic scholar or teacher so I don%26#039;t know what to make of the format....I hope your assignment was for free form poetry.





I do like the subject and the way your returned home to the %26quot;I was out in the lawn one day%26quot;.....starting and returning to the beginning is always a good style point for me.





Good luck.puppy teeth